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My Love

My love wakes in the morning, While the birds sing soft to hear; The day springs from night's dreaming, And summer's feet fling clear. Life scampers through the meadows, Daisies bloom beneath her feet; The streams flow through the woodland, With songs that are so sweet. Branches laden with their fruit, So low a limb could hold; As harvest filled with plenty, For a king in his treasure fold. Life danced with all the shadows, That were cast by her substance fair, My love laughed in the morning, As she lingered softly there. Now she sleeps there in the twilight, And my heart is filled with fear; Her laughter lost in darkness, And my joy died in a tear. I whispered, "Rest while I am singing", When shadows come at night; Each fair blossom swinging, With faint perfumed delight. When the world is filled with laughter, And the bird flies on the wing; When man calls to the hereafter, There's no song there left to sing. Her life fades to a shadow, Death loved her body fair; My love smiled in her sleeping, With no one but me to care.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/9/2012 9:25:00 PM
Marvelous construction! Brilliantly rhymed with gently flowing cadence. Your phrasing is sublime and your imagery divine. I am overwhelmed by the emotions you evoke. Simply magnificent!!! Love, Keith :)
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Date: 9/21/2011 8:25:00 PM
:*( Nothing need be said
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Date: 8/24/2011 10:06:00 AM
Massively emotional flow here...damn.
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Date: 8/22/2011 5:17:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Hello My Dear Precious, Gifted & Beautiful Elizabeth! = I Agree With Lovely Sara Below At All Points of Praise Etc. Yet, I Also Can View This Wonderful Verse As That In Perhaps A Mirrors Reflection & View *^_^* The Glass Containing Ones Own Heart & Soul??? Either Or Tis As Many of Your Beauties Painting, Depthful, Stirring & Exceptional My Dear &, Thank You, for The Kind Visit ~ Tis Always Nice to Behold Your Lovely Light!” === My Love & Warmth Unto You & Yours, Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 8/22/2011 7:59:00 AM
Romantic and sadness combined..Enjoyed reading this morn..Great rhythm, rhyme, and flow..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Thanks for reading about my dream with Princess awaking me with kisses..Sara
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Date: 8/22/2011 1:01:00 AM
elize, i am caught between bliss and nostalgia which is what i love... i cherish each line here, so possessed with tender yet languid strains.. and still you manage to weave these through a golden thread and allow the whole piece to just flow.. awesome work...babies are love's gifts and angels.. is this a real experience?? thank you for blessing my day! .. winnning wishes if for a contest..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:56:00 AM
Elizabeth, this is a beautifully sad, deeply touching poem. She must have been a wonderfullly special little lady for you to write so superbly about. God bless and thanks for commenting on my latest poetry. You are indeed a lovely lady and talented poetess as well. I'll be waiting and watching for more of your poetic beauty...Terry Martin
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:13:00 PM
Amazing poetry from you Elizabeth.Liked it very much.
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Date: 8/21/2011 10:19:00 PM
E.W., a sweet poem,,,, and my little love also does all of the above... and yes i seem to be the only one that cares! Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem, have yourself a wonderful night,..Linda
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Date: 8/21/2011 9:33:00 PM
Beautiful..... That is all I can say :-)
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Date: 8/21/2011 9:07:00 PM
You phrase so many lines with wonderful imagery and fancy fantasy! Love "Her life fades to a shadow"! You amaze me by the depth of inner emotion and creativity that you pour and spill onto this amazing write. "Bird flies on the wing", beautiful. Another deep and creative poem!
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Date: 8/21/2011 3:06:00 PM
glorious in its beauty, such care and emotion, first class as always Elizabeth. as she lingered softly there, true poetry. i love it, one for my favs
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Date: 8/21/2011 2:48:00 PM
Beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 8/21/2011 10:24:00 AM
nice , but Emily full filled all my dreams. john
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