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My Love (End Line Poem)

I look over at you lying STILL Asleep beside me IN Our bed. Your LOVE Is like a warm embrace AFTER A long time away. ALL The good things like THIS Till the end of TIME

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/19/2010 7:38:00 PM
Well crafted!
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Date: 2/19/2010 7:25:00 PM
Wonderful job Laura..I think this is special..Hg and Dane Ann will really like this one. BG
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Date: 2/19/2010 7:16:00 PM
Very nice endline poem...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty
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