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My Looking Glass Self

I fear not the unknown but what I cannot unleash and interpret stifled emotions blur my vision leaving my looking glass self – unclear my insides are in disarray, like shredded confetti propelling in the wind scattered pieces lose their bearing leaving my looking glass self - astray bewilderment surrounds me now, while revisiting an exhausted road heavy footprints convey a story leaving my looking glass self - questioning life’s sophistication is a struggle, akin to a rubix cube to succeed with no difficulty - cheat moulding fate to the desired outcome leaving my looking glass self - discreditable I excavate buried courage, and confront the image gazing back at me suffering has been endured, however the reflection stands upright and determined despite life’s battle, survival has conquered leaving my looking glass self – intact written by Diana-Marie Bombardieri January 11, 2012 Originally written in 1998

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/30/2012 9:17:00 AM
Wow this poem is amazing I don't even know what to say... I feel like you wrote exactly what I was sitting here trying to get out. Thank you for sharing and congrats on your win, you definitely deserved it! I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Date: 4/10/2012 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Emotional" contest Diana-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2012 12:12:00 PM
Diana-Marie congrats on your win, excellent..David
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Date: 4/10/2012 10:27:00 AM
congrats on your win cory
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Date: 4/10/2012 10:10:00 AM
Diana,, congratulations with your emotional poem! Thank you very much for sharing something so emotional with us. Some poems, are tough to express and share out in the open. God Bless. Always~ PD
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Date: 1/16/2012 4:20:00 PM
This is an oldie but a goodie. I enjoyed this one Diana-Marie.
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Date: 1/11/2012 7:10:00 PM
I like that you ended on a positive note since I got unclear, astray, etc. so INTACT is a good place to be, dear. Your style is a bit like your mom's. It's really interesting and I think it's a bit genetic. MY daughter also likes to write but like me, she is drawn to rhyme!! (and she does not even read my stuff) I enjoyed your reflecting thoughts here. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/11/2012 12:14:00 PM
A fine write...thanks for sharing :-)
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Date: 1/11/2012 12:04:00 PM
What an outstanding poem you have shared with us today Diana-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2012 11:18:00 AM
Captured my senses from the first line to the last...incredible poem. I like the style you used also. Enjoyed !!!
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Date: 1/11/2012 11:12:00 AM
I enjoyed this piece, nice flow. Liked the repeating line with just one word different. This conveys so much, very thought provoking. Best wishes Em :)
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