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My Longing

My Longing It is the second day now That I wish to be the glass You drink water from, thirsty I have craved for so long For my dreams to come true And here I am now Because my lips long desperately To touch every single tremble of yours I love you! Obsessed with The upcoming joy Flying from endless meadows As the wind whispers softly In the petals of colourful flowers And I can hardly wait, my sweet desire, For my fingers To collect the scattered beads Of sunlight in your beautiful hair I love you

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/6/2014 7:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Stefan

Skat A

Date: 4/22/2014 1:14:00 PM

Stefan,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2014 11:57:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Stefan :) - I choose your first beautiful written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2014 8:45:00 AM

Hi Stefan, , WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ivo Cos

Date: 4/17/2014 3:53:00 PM

WOW! Nice poem indeed plus HRVATSKA has such a nice flag and my name is quite common there, I think. I luv the words glazba & rjecnik.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/17/2014 10:06:00 AM

Oh Stefan... such a beauty and passion in your write.. Good job!! ^__^

Stefan Maxima
Date: 4/17/2014 10:10:00 AM

Thank you Carolyn! This is nice comment ,and I am proud on your words. Wishing you a blessed Easter With love Maxima

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/17/2014 10:01:00 AM

Dear Stefan, How wonderful it is you found a love that inspires you to write such beautiful poetry. I'm smiling with envy : ) Wishing you a blessed Easter, Carolyn