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My Life

I breathe a sea of emotions I am the painter of the vast sky The sun and the moon whispers each memory when I close and open my eyes I rise with the mountains and drown beneath the ocean's time I fly with the birds and dance with the trees I see the air's breath through its gentle breeze I was born from one's history and died from a subtle knife I might reborn after a very long time Just read my words and listen to the music of my heart My life is a song of endless poetry

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Date: 7/7/2016 2:05:00 PM
Adele,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/6/2016 1:57:00 AM
Adele,:), Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I TOO THINK YOU ARE AN Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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