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The first ring he ever gave, it turned my finger green but it meant a lot anyway I wish you could have seen. It feels like the years flew by, and they are moving fast though we had some bumps our love just seems to last. It happened very differently, our meeting a little odd Paths destined to cross Because of the man called God. I am grateful for this love, This perfect match for me And the little miracles That I get to see.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/25/2014 2:02:00 AM
this poem is interesting,God had done alot for you.nice poem Jess
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Date: 6/25/2014 2:07:00 PM
Sometimes my words get mixed, but what I was meaning is..Though I don't go to church, I do believe in God. I am not some person who preaches to others, hell, I have my own faults.
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Date: 6/25/2014 2:06:00 PM
Thank you Cornel, Yes God has done a lot for me, though sometimes I wonder how I deserve it. Believe me when I say, I don't go to church and think I am some super Christian lol, but I do believe in God and his miracles. Glad you enjoyed this poem. Take care my friend, Jess
Date: 6/24/2014 8:40:00 PM
Wow, loved this, you have great style, not sure if you read any by Casarah, but you may like if you haven't!!!! Cheers
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Date: 6/24/2014 9:09:00 PM
Thank you Arthur. I actually have read stuff by Casarah, in fact, she is one of my favs on here. Glad you enjoyed this piece my friend. Take care, Jess
Date: 6/24/2014 6:52:00 PM
This is such a wonderful, inspirational, heartfelt write - love it! Warmest regards to you, my friend, Jessica.
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Date: 6/24/2014 7:02:00 PM
Thank you Pandita, you are always so kind about my work. I am glad you liked this piece. Take care friend, Jess :)
Date: 6/24/2014 6:39:00 PM
Dear Jessica: The voice in your heart is vivid. Keep writing. Leon
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Date: 6/24/2014 7:02:00 PM
Thank you Leon, I am very glad you liked this piece. I appreciate your warm comments. Take care Friend, Jess

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