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My Last Words To You

my last words to you in a place where i once dwelled, there lived a boy i loved so well, he took his love away from me, and now is willing to set me free. i even know the reason why, the other girl was prettier than i, i ran for home an cried on my bed , an not a single word was said, my mother came home from work that night , an searched for me left an right, she came upstairs,my door she broke, and there she saw me strung by a rope. an on my jeans there was a note that i had wrote, it read: dig a grave, dig it deep, with marble stone , from head to feet, and on my grave, place a dove , an tell the world i died for love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/29/2011 1:21:00 PM
Congrats on being featured. Interesting piece. Some grammatical errors but the last stanza in particular is stunning. Well done x
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Date: 8/29/2011 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations Rebecca on your fine poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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