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My Juicy Jacket

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My Juicy Jacket

The county's weather is 
getting colder,
our love-string is just 
getting stronger;
she need warmth and 
can't wait any longer...
I hung my jacket tightly 
on her shoulder.

She is a budding beauty, I 
am the beholder;
my world is awashed 
with her fresh...aroma.
This flower won't fall 
under autumn's aura; 
I hung my Jacket tightly 
on her shoulder.

We will weather the 
weather together,
this radiant ray of mine 
has but one real reason;
I have a sweetheart 
staying close every 
I hung my jacket tightly 
on her shoulder.

Our minds melt as our 
body-blend got bolder,
eyes closed, lips locked 
on a couch of snow,
we drooled as one to a 
garden of...glow;
I hung my jacket tightly 
on her shoulder.

Sandwished like files  
kept in an office folder;
it's January first, and yes, 
a dreamy date!
We were blown off by the 
fist of fate...
I hung my jacket tightly 
on her shoulder.

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  1. Date: 7/4/2013 12:14:00 AM
    "tremendously awesome........... congrats!!! SKAT"

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 9:03:00 AM
    Congrats on your well deserved win

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 7:59:00 PM
    I like what you did with this poem, especially the repeat line, great entry foe for the contest winning wishes xxx

  1. Date: 6/3/2013 3:30:00 PM
    nice to read you again, adelke... enjoyed this sweet and well- arranged work... so wonderful!..:) huggs