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My Indulgent Vacation

A paling sun descends in late day; with a wink, it signals the moon to rise. In only a blink of my rested eyes, newly tanned limbs cool in the sand, and the foamy tide sprinkles my lips with a salty drink. New memories cover me like a soft terry-cloth robe as I lazily lie alone on an exotic beach across the globe. Distant, green-peaked mountains seem to climb to heavenly heights where a gracious sky falls tranquil to the ocean’s gold-flaked lobe. I selfishly indulge in this dream vacation all alone without a speck of guilt or any thought of remorse shown. Silky sand and bluest skies stretch out until the stars sink low to meet upon secluded beach and crown me from fair summer's throne. written 2/7/15 for Shadow's Indulgence Contest

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Date: 2/18/2015 9:46:00 PM
Nice win....PD
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:46:00 PM
Rhonda, CONGRATULATIONS, in Shadow's indulgence contest! -LUV- SKAT
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Date: 2/14/2015 12:39:00 PM
Lovely and wonderful piece of work,Rhonda...Congrats on your superb win...Kudos to you,great poetess...
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Date: 2/11/2015 8:36:00 PM
Rhonda, wonderful imagery of a wonderful indulgent vacation! Your words flow so beautifully. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/11/2015 2:30:00 PM
beautifully crafted Rhonda - such divine imagery - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/11/2015 12:47:00 PM
Nice write. I get too bored on beaches, except around bonfires at night; I prefer mountain lakes and waterfalls.
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Date: 2/11/2015 9:57:00 AM
sky falls tranquil to the ocean’s gold-flaked lobe/ wow...Congrats on win Rhonda
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Date: 2/11/2015 8:18:00 AM
Love the form yiu used and the imagery you ve used... congrats on the win.. nad!
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Date: 2/11/2015 8:07:00 AM
I enjoyed your indulgence, congratulations!
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Date: 2/11/2015 5:58:00 AM
a special vacation Rhonda that strikes joyful chords congrats on placing 1st hugs
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Date: 2/9/2015 8:31:00 AM
I could use a vacation like this about once a week! Great scene you painted with your words.
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Date: 2/8/2015 9:44:00 PM
A lovely dream . . . and I am a big dreamer . . . May you continue to dream big wonderful dreams and then chase each one down!! Best wishes dear friend.
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Date: 2/8/2015 7:02:00 PM
This is so lovely, flows like honey!
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Date: 2/8/2015 6:27:00 PM
my kind of self-pampering so well crafted, Rhonda... love the portrait of your shore.. huggs
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Date: 2/8/2015 4:58:00 PM
Such a wonderful indulgence, Rhonda. You've painted a beautiful picture in great detail with your flowing words. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/8/2015 10:06:00 AM
Your descriptive wording and great imagery bring this piece to life. This poem is honey and spice flowing off the tongue like syrup, leaving a sweet after taste....delicious! Emile. #7
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Date: 2/8/2015 5:40:00 AM
I LOVE THIS FORM!!! I LOVE THE CONTENT! I LOVE YOUR USE OF ENJAMBMENT! You write with such beauty and clarity. :) I'm sure this will do very well, indeed.
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