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My Icy Grave

My name is Paul, a boy of sixteen years when the Titanic became my icy grave. To the ocean floor, I drowned with dreams and fears, like my dad, a fisherman, lost in the waves. When we boarded the ship, my mother heard cries. A premonition dismissed with hopes and sighs. In a half-empty lifeboat, denied a seat, my destiny to die but not in defeat. Mother begged for my life then returned to die with me. Half empty lifeboats floated as the band played a hymm. Angels descended on mother and son in the cold sea and carried us to my father in Heaven's bosom. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, April 10, 2012 for My Heart Will Go On and On contest ( Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver) Fourth Place *A Rispetto and a Quatrain

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Date: 4/11/2012 2:02:00 PM
congrats Rhonda on an amazing writ and win for Titanic theme complimented by an elegant photo to express feelings luv..
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Date: 4/11/2012 10:35:00 AM
Rhonda congrats on your win, excellent.David
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Date: 4/11/2012 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "My Heart" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2012 1:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Rhonda emotional write xx
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Date: 4/10/2012 8:36:00 AM
Smile ˜ "Truly, I Tell You That, 'Today,' You Shall Be With ME In Paradise." * O Death Where Is Thy Sting; O Grave, Where Is Thy Victory ˜ "CRUSHED" ˜ I'll Have A Twist Of Lime In Mine, Please ˜ This Is A Beautiful Poem, Reflecting, The Beauty Inside Of You * My Love, Always, John!:) ˜
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