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My Hero

My hero
She is but eleven She is my angel sent from heaven She came to me at the tender age of twenty one She gave me reason not to run She kept me grounded She was the reason my heart pounded She made my life brand new She healed my heart through and through She showed me how to love She showed me what that stuff is made of She keeps me on my toes She won't allow me to wallow in my woes She senses when my spirits are low She will never let it show but She always seems to know She amazes me every day she grows She knows when to lean in and give me a hug She knows when I've had a bad day and not to bug She jumps in before I ask She completes every task She excels in academics and dance She shows me what can be if given a chance She picks up my good bits and pieces She continues to leave me speechless She always wears a smile She is my amazing child  She is my first, no one is above She is my first true love She is my daughter Alaya  Before her I was a zero She is my only HERO Lay
** For Crystal Wilkins My Hero contest * 1st Place

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Date: 1/27/2011 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Crystal's contest "My Hero" Lay. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2011 12:11:00 PM
great news on your 1st place Lay.
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Date: 1/18/2011 2:44:00 PM
I knew this would rank high, Lay. Congratulations on taking first place! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/18/2011 2:33:00 PM
What a beautiful tribute to your daughter. Congratulations on your first place win. Well deserved. Best wishes, Deb
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Date: 1/18/2011 1:46:00 PM
She's obviously a daughter to cherish Walayee, and you have paid tribute to her most beautifully in your lovely poetry. Many congratulations on your win....:)
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Date: 1/18/2011 11:54:00 AM
Congrats Lay on your first place win in the My Hero contest with this astounding entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch write with luv..
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Date: 1/10/2011 7:16:00 AM
a beautiful dedication to your daughter, and I have a feeling she feels the same towards you ~~
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Date: 1/3/2011 10:34:00 PM
wow, how nice to have a hero that is one of your own kids!! I think, now that my daugher is all grown up, she is one of MY heros too!! Luv ya, andrea
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Date: 1/3/2011 8:25:00 PM
very emotional and true. john h lovingiii
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Date: 1/3/2011 11:57:00 AM
How lucky you are to have such a daughter, Lay. You have been blessed, my friend. I'm sure this will do well in the contest. A true delight to read! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/3/2011 7:28:00 AM
Stunning tribute to your amazing daughter, Walayee.. All the best for Crystal's contest with this beauty.. Love Wilma
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:04:00 AM
Excellent entry and beautiful piece on your light in your life....enjoyed Much!!! Michael
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Date: 1/3/2011 4:02:00 AM
good good and more good lay,
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Date: 1/2/2011 7:56:00 AM
What a wonderful tribute to an amazing child bringing u joy and completeness every day .. magnificent entry for Crystal's contest ..good luck Lay.. and thankxx for your emotional words in commenting on "Departure"... the themes of so many of the contests stir memories so fond of my parents and their family life until torn apart by premature death.. hoped u would like the entry ..good luck with your first contest.. u will receive some spectacular ones...with luv..
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Date: 1/2/2011 5:37:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this one which reads like a winner to me...Such love for your child that you have expressed..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work this morn.Sara
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Date: 1/2/2011 4:48:00 AM
ohhh, mama's girl! thanks for the visit, lay... love it. hope you can pas by and share your insights on my latest work" winter solstice chant.." hot momma!! :) nette
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:59:00 PM
Beautiful...I can relate so much to the feelings you express in this poem....Thank you for your comments on my poem...JoanMarie
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Date: 1/1/2011 5:48:00 PM
Very touchy dedication to the child who is your first love, Walayee. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 1/1/2011 4:27:00 PM
Absolutely elegant dedication to one special child, dear Lay! A definite winner is this poem and even more, is Alaya! Reminds me soo much of my Andrea! Happy New Year! Love, Audrey
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Date: 1/1/2011 2:38:00 PM
this was a real treat to read! from a poetic standpoint, it is sprinkled with alliteration and words made to be dazingly adorable.. she's daddy's girl, alright! lots of winning score in the contest, lay..:)
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