My Heartbeat - Lenore

She walks in Spirit Through the threshold of my Heart Everlasting LOVE

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/13/2012 8:33:00 PM

Such images! I too especially love the middle line. And the entire poem as a whole.. Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2010 6:23:00 PM

wonderful middle line. thru the threshhold of your heart!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2009 12:23:00 PM

Beautiful use of language to describe the feeling of true love, HGarvey. I was drawn to the title as Edgar Allen Poe's "Lenore" is one of my favorites. You have great talent; I'm a fan and you're going into my favorites. Thanks for your comments on my poems. I have just returned from a trip and it's good to be back on Poetry Soup again. Best wishes, Carolyn

Belinda Parish

Date: 3/9/2009 8:58:00 PM

Excellent write, HGarvey. Beautiful.

Arany P.

Date: 3/9/2009 7:49:00 AM

well written!! the second line is so beautiful!! lovely write there ~ Arany

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/9/2009 5:50:00 AM

I am so thrilled to read your incredibly beautiful poetry again dear brother. And I thank you for the info on the recipe! I will research, but I am afraid if it turns out good, I will eat the entire thing and become instantly addicted! ~lol~ Hope you are all better. Have a beautiful day. Love you, Shar xoxo

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/9/2009 5:29:00 AM

Everlasting love, such a gift HG, so rare and seeminly unattainble, you dear sir have been so blessed.