My Heart Is With You - Rondelet

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My hearts with you And that's where it wants to be My hearts with you Without you life would be so blue With you happy my heart will be Within yours entrust my key My hearts with you. Dorian Petersen Potter Aka ladydp2000 Copyright@2014 November,04,2014

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Mama Bear

Date: 11/5/2014 3:35:00 PM

Dorian you are the winner. You have your children and a wonderful person is out there waiting for you. It is God's plan and you will be blessed. I went through something similar and met a fabulous man who made me very happy. Trustworthy and loving what more could one ask for. You are now on your new journey to happiness. Just remember God loves you and you are special. Do not ever settle for second best. Hugs and blessings Edith

Mama Bear

Date: 11/5/2014 6:02:00 AM

I hope you have the love you have written Beautiful hugs Edith

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/5/2014 11:42:00 AM

No, mama bear, I tell you why, a few months ago, my partner, my dear husband of 22 long years whom I loved so much and trusted with all my heart, cheated on me with some bimbo and wanted a divorce, so I gave it to him, mama bear. I had to! I better don't say anymore here, you got me started. ;) it's very hard and painful, all and surreal but I always have God,Jesus with me and also have my children and will make it thru somehow. So sad that many men and women dont take marriage seriously, and then destroy a true love and a family, all for what, but just for fun and senseless sex. Thank you so much for stopping by and your kind comments mama bear. I'll visit your page very soon. :) love and hugs! xxxxx D.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/5/2014 12:44:00 AM

Beautiful rondelet, Dorian! I love the flow of the words and form...thank you so much for your kind comments on my page. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/5/2014 11:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Rhonda, glad you liked it.and you're more than welcome, I really enjoyed reading your work. Love and hugs! And blessings too! :) xxxx D.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/4/2014 5:15:00 PM

Very lovely Dorian...hugs Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/4/2014 5:23:00 PM

Thanks so much Tim, so nice to see you around again,my dear friend. Hugs! Xxxx love and light! :) xxxxx D.

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 11/4/2014 1:43:00 PM

Love how sincere this reads...right from your heart.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/4/2014 3:52:00 PM

It is for sure! It was written all from my very heart and soul. Thank you for stopping by and commenting. Best wishes! :) xxxx D.