My Heart

My heart overtakes me Sadness covers my eyes so I cannot see My heart desires to be free My heart overtakes me Loneliness and I sit under the weeping willow tree My heart has sorrows deeper than the sea My heart over takes me Brokenhearted load too heavy to carry My heart suffocating this is scary My heart over takes me Sacrifice screams frantically My heart, my heart let me be…

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Curtis White

Date: 8/17/2011 8:22:00 AM

Hi Faizah. I am reading you again and enjoying. You could be the spokes person for alot of people, you do it so well. Take a break once in awhile from your pain, it will help you survive.

John Castro

Date: 7/25/2011 3:39:00 AM

my heart let me be that last line made me cry:( 7up

Joseph Osita

Date: 5/29/2011 8:06:00 AM

"Loneliness and I sit under the weeping willow tree".That's a wonderful expression.This poem is beautifully sculptured! I really enjoyed the read.*hugs* Joseph

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/28/2011 5:18:00 PM

Heartfelt write my poet friend... words from the heart make the best poems...MJF