My Hair-Do

Girl was born blonde and blue eyed. Tamed down and made it look right. As I grew-up my hair looked fryed. Look oh what a sight. Entered in Rick's"A bad hair day"contest.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/27/2011 6:31:00 AM

Ok well if it's for Rick Terrie you need to change the form to CHASTUSHKA Light & Love

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/19/2011 9:42:00 AM

i'm not laughing. jhl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 7:43:00 PM

I can't remember which one I gave you heads up on. Anyway, this is sure cute and I'm thinking maybe this is the redo? A redo hairdo. haha. Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/14/2011 1:44:00 PM

I like the revision, Teresa. You could get the proper 7 syllables in the third line if you just said, "As I grew, my hair looked fried." Love you, Carolyn

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/13/2011 8:43:00 PM

hahaha. good one Teresa.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/13/2011 1:42:00 PM

This is very funny, Teresa. And that's from one blue-eyed blonde to another. I'm going to send you a Soup mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn