Home » Poems » Jean Murray » My Greatest Fear

My Greatest Fear

My greatest fear would be to lose you my dear. So intertwined are we, I cannot see a life without thee. Bonded were we before you were even born. I remember that morn. Your little eyes half open. Your mouth seeking my breast. As you lay on my chest. My heart filled with love. Heavenly child from above. Deep connections were made Emotional bond so strong. I'm thrilled you came along. To give me strength to carry on. The meaning of unconditional love You revealed to me my sweet. So grateful that we should meet. My greatest fear would be to lose you my dear. So intertwined are we I cannot see a life without thee.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2016 1:08:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Jean - I really can relate to this poem my friend:-( hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 10/12/2016 2:33:00 PM

Thank you Jan. That feeling is hard to beat, when our offspring we meet.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/12/2016 8:48:00 AM

A very deep, emotional piece.... Congrats Jean, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)

Jean Murray
Date: 10/12/2016 11:44:00 AM

Thank you Teddy. My daughters can always make me dig deep.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 10/11/2016 8:10:00 PM

Great write here Jean, congrates on ur win in the contest

Lewis Raynes
Date: 10/12/2016 1:18:00 PM

Lol. Its in ur back pocket.

Jean Murray
Date: 10/12/2016 3:44:00 AM

Thank you Lewis. My greatest fear at the moment is that I have lost my mojo. You haven't seen it have you?

Just James

Date: 6/26/2016 1:57:00 PM

Wonderful write...great contest result! Congrats

Jean Murray
Date: 6/26/2016 5:21:00 PM

Thank you James.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/25/2016 6:44:00 PM

Very nice, Jean!

Jean Murray
Date: 6/26/2016 1:16:00 AM

Thank you Kim.

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/25/2016 5:36:00 PM

Very heartfelt and beautiful, and every mom's worst fear, Jean. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, SAndra

Jean Murray
Date: 6/25/2016 5:41:00 PM

Thank you Sandra.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/25/2016 3:56:00 PM

I wrote of my fear of losing my marbles but my other greatest fear is to lose my son:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 6/25/2016 5:40:00 PM

Thank you Jan.

Lu Loo

Date: 6/25/2016 3:07:00 PM

Jean, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Jean Murray
Date: 6/25/2016 3:14:00 PM

Luloo, I have tears in my eyes. My Precious and I don't always see eye to eye. So I had not shown her this poem. But after this wonderful win, I had to recite it to her just now. She tried hard not to smile, but by the end, could not help herself and thanked me. So...Thank you!!

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/24/2016 5:34:00 PM

Every parents worst fear is to lose their child, I think. Sexy belly!

Jean Murray
Date: 6/25/2016 4:45:00 AM

Daniel, how can that belly be sexy??

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/24/2016 2:15:00 PM

- Beautiful written, Jean - You look nice with baby belly :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 6/24/2016 2:28:00 PM

You sweet talker you Anne-Lise!!