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MY GREATEST DREAM

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MY GREATEST DREAM

My greatest dream is called you...
A dream I hold so closely to my heart...
A dream I couldn’t give a worthy name to just yours...
You have always been my dream called love...
Your voice is as calm and peaceful as the nature of a dove...
Your words... I can’t start to explain...
They turn shadows into human...
They bring all my dead side into life...
Love can never be explained but it is understood perfectly by your heart and mine...
The impossible can only bend when love is on duty because with you there is nothing too
impossible for me to do...
For me living with men is history because you are an angel sent to me from above to
deliver me from my misery...
No better fantasy can ever be wished for and accomplished than this dream of mine called
you...
Now I know what it feel like touching and staring into those beautiful stone of crystals
called the stars which are in your eyes...
I can say I have been touched by an angel because only angels can take me to that place
only us have reached...
I now can see what my hearts eyes have been missing for long...
I now feel what my heart has been longing to feel forever...
Am glad I found you...
You are the most priceless thing that recreates a heart no matter how broken it is...
I AM GRATEFUL FOR THE GIFT OF YOU...

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  1. Date: 9/23/2010 5:52:00 AM
    Jennifer, Hi I am the contest sponsor of the Pantoum contest... I wanted to let you know that this poem will not place in my contest because you did not follow my guidelines... I LIKED the poem very much, it is well written just not what I am looking for.... Not trying to be rude my dear, just wanted to explain my reason for disqualifying your poem..... Keep up the good work and perhaps you will be in my winners circle eventually.....:JP}

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 7:02:00 AM
    Thanks for the contest submission. Lovely verse but it does not seem to have anything to do with a "folk remedey" for getting well like castor oil or a mustard plaster..if you are saying love is a way of healing from wounds that needs to be made clear. Also almost always you need to label your form to be concidered in a contest. Thanks again for letting me enjoy your love poem.