My Girl

I got myself a girl (She wants more) I call her from work (She wants more) I take her out to the mall (She wants more) I buy her chocolate and flowers (She wants more) I give her presents for no reason (She wants more) Pay her bills (She wants more) Take her on a cruise (She wants more) Introduce her to my parents (She wants more) Put a ring on her finger (She wants more) Walk her down the aisle (She wants more) Hold her hand (She wants more) A kiss on the cheek (She wants more) A kiss on the lips (She wants more) Run my hands through her hair (She wants more) Feel her body next to mine (She wants more) Uuuh Aaaah, Uuuh Aaaah (She wants more) Cuddle every night (She wants more) Girls, girls, girls Can't live with them Can't live without them

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Peter Dome

Date: 7/11/2014 7:02:00 AM

I really think this is a very good write, and happens to a lot of us, not to say all girls are like this, some love to give, but for many, this is reality. 'Treat em mean keep em keen' so the saying goes. I love how you set the poem. I could feel the angst and frustration. great stuff best wishes Pete. your excellent.

John Pen
Date: 8/25/2014 4:36:00 AM

Thanks Peter

Ziad Gadou

Date: 7/4/2014 6:26:00 PM

hahahaha a great read, i imagined (she wants more) sang by a choir!

John Pen
Date: 7/8/2014 12:38:00 AM

I just might attempt to sing it but I must warn you that I sound like a frog. Anyway, thanks for stopping by

Herzel Poshiwa

Date: 7/1/2014 2:09:00 AM

Haha.......great write here John, we always do want more hey.....girls,girls,girls will always be girls.....xx

John Pen
Date: 7/1/2014 3:47:00 AM

I have read the first 100 chapters of "Understanding Women" but it seems the more I read the more I get confused. It looks like the book has a million chapters and I probably will never finish reading it