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My Friends Outside

Two Red Pines outside my Window stand ready every day Bristling with long needles And runkled cones, still young My first sound upon awakening …..The sweet seeee---sawww Of the Red Winged Blackbird, Migrating home Soon, the swamp I navigate daily On my walk will fill with Feathered friends- All of us excited by emerging Cattails…. Comforted, together 03/04/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/16/2012 10:48:00 AM
Excellent nature write..I think that the Redwinged Blackbird is a lovely bird ...We see it here rarely..Thanks for sharing this one with us..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 4/15/2012 7:29:00 AM
And again, my heart warms with the vision you share in your writes dear poet ! Fantastic write sir ! You'll be receiving my comments backwards James, but all the same my friend. I want to see your writes for a bit, cause Noah and I have been very busy, renovating and moving in our new house ! *smiles*....much love, james
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Date: 3/21/2012 10:48:00 AM
Pleased to meet you feathered friends.. Lovely post Jimbo..Hope you are doing fine-Charma
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Date: 3/20/2012 11:06:00 PM
Jim, this is very lovely.. sounds like a charming wake-up.. thank you for your kind comment as well.. always..pd
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Date: 3/15/2012 1:08:00 PM
Awesome piece! Always, Laura
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Date: 3/15/2012 6:23:00 AM
What a fabby rustic outdoorsy poem Jimbo..I so wanna go there.. Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/5/2012 5:46:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent piece of poetry today Jimbo. I hope this new week ahead proves fruitful to you within your life and in your poetry also. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2012 1:58:00 PM
Lovely poem you written here James, bravo.... - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/4/2012 1:20:00 PM
This is a beauty Jim! Enjoyed the visuals tonight ;) love Wilma
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