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To walk a path and not understand the hurt or destruction one causes to loved ones and friends,,,,the endless nights worrying- wondering -anticipating the outcome for those trends... Looking in the eyes of a soldier laid to rest brings no reason nor answer for these justices we uphold,, for yet these same laws r the reason my friend stay so distant and cold.... Once thought we would take the world by ease or a brutal storm,,,, I'm left here to remember those plans myself with my heart in hand and a mind all torn.... You were a man of many depths and attributes unlike I known in my life,,, I only hope to fulfill your strength for success in these troubling times I find hard and strife..... I ask the creator to give you a paradise bountiful with no means to end,,,, you've earned your place amongst the greats ill always know your close around me friend....

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Date: 11/23/2013 6:45:00 AM
a lovely write from the heart, Sean., I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/23/2013 6:39:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Sean ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/23/2013 5:16:00 AM
Sean,, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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