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My Fondest Memories

As a delivery driver, I had a right to that space. I calmly requested him to allow me to park. I had time sensitive deliveries, but he said, “No!” It was a loading zone designed for people like myself. But it was Christmas, and parks were very difficult to find. I was rather dumfounded until I remembered the season. I think that he was dumfounded with what I next said to him. In a pleasant tone, I said, “Come on man, it’s Christmas!” He sat up in his vehicle and drove away. I cannot remember a more pleasant memory. 12072016 cj PS Contest, My Fondest Memory, Frank Herrera

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Date: 12/12/2016 8:59:00 AM
I don't know what to say. Are you being flippant, perhaps saying a fondest can't be picked, I am unsure. Attitude is well conveyed, but without hearing your tone, I can't pick up on the 'feeling' behind the tone. It doesn't mean others won't. I am intrigued by your write and left wanting more!!! CayCay
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 12/14/2016 11:18:00 AM
Hi Cay Cay. Thanks for your comments.

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