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MY FIRST SONATA

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MY FIRST SONATA

My first sonata,
A song that I sang on winter's blue,
My first sonata,
A kiss to tell and be self true.

My first sonata,
Melodically dancing across my mind,
My first sonata,
Your par of smile is one of the kind.

My first sonata,
Never really been in reality,
My first sonata,
Just filling up all love sensuality.

My first sonata,
You will always there on one's bare,
My first sonata,
Forever cherish and forever care.

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  1. Date: 6/25/2012 8:05:00 AM
    nicely done Melanie,hope its not your last

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 12:38:00 AM
    Lovely poem!

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 9:25:00 AM
    Beautifully written..regards INK-U-SCRIPT

    Tan Avatar Melanie Tan
    Date: 6/19/2012 7:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And yet more to be learn!Thank you again,Pace!
  1. Date: 6/19/2012 6:54:00 AM
    beautiful, love elizabeth

    Tan Avatar Melanie Tan
    Date: 6/19/2012 7:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you,dear.