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Below is the poem entitled MY FIRST GIRLFRIEND which was written by poet Astrid Ivy Gibbs. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Magic filled the air
as she took my hand, trembling
though, I wasn't afraid
she was for I was her first.

I was quite surprised
how she took control, assertive
but, not in a dominating way.
I didn't have to walk her through it.

Dazed, I drove her home
but, I felt satisfied and content
and hoped she was feeling relaxed.
She told me she was in love, and smiled.

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  1. Date: 12/5/2008 6:18:00 AM
    Very romantic poem and so lovingly written. Kristin is right - it reads so innocent and pure. Conveyed your feelings beautifully! ~Juliane