My First Date
My first date was when I was 14.
He was older then me.
We went for a walk on the beach.
That took us back to the car.
Things were going great until there was a knock.
That is when it all started to fall apart.
Looking up like a deer in the headlights.
As he suggested we leave for the night.
Meeting up with some friends
never would have expected my brother there.
Now the date was officially done
my brother is who took me home.
Cory long
My first date contest
carol brown
Copyright © Cory Long | Year Posted 2011
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