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My First Car

I sat there in the drivers seat.. smelling that new car smell.. turning the key to my freedom, I'm now an adult..can't you tell? Imagining the wind rushing through my already messy hair.. as I cruised down Route 66, In my mind not a single care. It seemed possibilities were endless.. just how far and how fast to go. Hearing wheels on the pavement, for independence I'd struck a blow. Tomorrow would be soon enough to think about what I'd done.. A big hole in my meager savings, and a monthly payments begun. For Frank's contest...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/14/2014 8:45:00 AM
This is why, Barb, I drive an old 95 VW Golf. Paid for. No monthly payment. What the hell, it gets me there. Good stuff. Congrats. Love, daver
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Date: 10/26/2010 11:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win in contest......Luv/Best wishes...........Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/25/2010 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your win in Frank's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2010 9:04:00 PM
Barbara, I'm glad this made it into the top places. Congrats on your well deserved win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/22/2010 9:39:00 PM
beautiful poem Barbara. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 10/22/2010 6:38:00 PM
Enjoyed reading (or should I say riding along? ^_~) this wonderful poem about your first car :) congrats on your win, Barbara :) --nikko :)
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Date: 10/21/2010 3:58:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Barbara
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Date: 10/21/2010 3:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/21/2010 2:32:00 PM
Congrats Barb on your win in Frank's contest with this beautiful write and wonderful entry for the contest... enjoy another grand victory and sweet success today with luv...
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Date: 10/21/2010 1:40:00 PM
Great poem Barbara. We have to pay a price for freedom. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/21/2010 1:09:00 PM
So glad to see you in Frank's winners' circle. Congratulations, dear LNC. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/15/2010 11:29:00 AM
That ending is sorta a let down but we enjoyed those days didn't we...Good luck in the contest reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 10/15/2010 5:23:00 AM
Nice one Barbara, I can just see you sitting there wondering to smile at the car or cry at the payments. Good luck in Frank's contest >> James
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Date: 10/14/2010 8:21:00 PM
AHHHHSOME, BAbara, I hope this does well in the contest, capturing smell and sound in a new car! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/14/2010 7:50:00 AM
Original and delightful entry for the "smell and sound" contest, dear LNC. There is something very special about getting into a new car and enjoying that scent. Wishing you success in the contest. Great humr in the last verse,too. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/13/2010 5:11:00 PM
Very nice memories recollected in tranquility, Barbara
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Date: 10/13/2010 4:03:00 PM
Nothing like those first moments in one's life....we never forget the sights, sounds or smells!! A good one to reflect upon...good luck in the contest, Barbara!! :)
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Date: 10/13/2010 3:55:00 PM
sounds like the great teenage years! lol
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