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'My Field of Dreams'

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'My Field of Dreams'


In my field of dreams I see you Walking towards me With that smile on your face With promise and hope in your eyes Somehow your reflection has gone dim My hope at times too But Then I remember the life you lived It was all about hope All about not giving up Never forgetting to smile That will always remain – A bittersweet memory Times like tonight you are so close by Not physically But I can feel your breathe against my skin I can feel the warmth of your touch It’s not in the things you said, It’s in the way you did them Even when I miss you The most Still, I am thankful I was blessed with you Even if just for a little while
*the anniversary of my friend passing away is on the horizon. This write was inspired by that* ©271120121430

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  1. Date: 1/25/2013 5:06:00 AM
    Wonderful poem, written with love.

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 7:14:00 PM
    This dedication is so tenderly, lovingly written. I sometimes feel lost loved one's so near. Though the body leaves our presence... the love never leaves our life.

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 7:18:00 AM
    A most gracful write Wilma; really well Done I extend good new year wishes Across the miles and seas, may Gods Blessing be with you.."

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:41:00 PM
    A bittersweet poem indeed and going to.my favs..it gave me goosebumps.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 3:31:00 PM
    truly wonderful dedication, this is lovely...

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 11:41:00 AM
    You have written such a heartfelt poem here, Missy-- it really shows how much he means to you, and I find it so beautiful how this transcends death-- bittersweet indeed, especially knowing when he passed away... he sounds so special and you were both blessed... thanks for sharing this touching write.. mwahugs!

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 4:59:00 PM
    wow, an amazing poem to remember your friend by. I really enjoyed this one, Wilma. Such friends stay with us forever.

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 3:59:00 PM
    What a phenomenal write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tonight! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 2:49:00 PM
    Beautiful write Wilma...I'm sure your love is still felt. <3

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 12:41:00 PM
    Beautiful and touching poem,dear Wilma.Very nice to read your wonderful free verse this evening,CTC! Doing fine up here,how are you? Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 11:25:00 AM
    It is so beautiful written Wilma, but still so touching that anyone can cry. Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 8:32:00 AM
    A touching dedication, Wilma. Nicely done. Ruben.

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 7:19:00 AM
    It is always such a pleasure reading your flowing free verse!! jag

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 7:19:00 AM
    This is lovely Wilma xx

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 6:58:00 AM
    Wilma a wonderful dedication to your friend...I hope you are well and it's nice to read your work again....David