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My Favorite Christmas Present

My favorite Christmas present a bunch of lilies white as a milky crescent by street children who reside in the slums came to meet me to offer them some alms I saw almighty residing in their eyes a gleam of joy enshrined in my heart in arise

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 6:38:00 PM

Nice To read this one again,, linda

Skat A

Date: 12/29/2015 6:31:00 PM

NARAYANA, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2015 1:34:00 PM

- Hey Narayana :) - Welcome with your first poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/19/2015 6:30:00 PM

Hi Narayana, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2015 3:51:00 PM

Narayana, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/19/2015 11:12:00 AM

This is a precious and touching rhyme. It might read better if written 'heart arise' instead of 'heart in arise.' Somehow that last 'in' threw the good flow off for me, but I do truly like the poem ... CayCay