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My Fantasy World

I want to touch the moon And sit on the star, But every time I try, They are too far! I want to fly like a bird In the sky, But every time I try, The sky is so high! I want to be a Beautiful butterfly, But every time I try, I am left with a sigh! I would love to be A friendly fairy, But every time I try, I become so weary! How beautiful it would be To be a princess! But every time I try, I'm left in a mess! But then, I'm happy to be just a girl, Dreaming nightly of my fantasy world !!!! -------------------
(Picture prompt - 3)

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Date: 12/26/2016 2:04:00 AM
What a fantasy world. Great. Congratulation, Kai
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Date: 12/22/2016 11:50:00 PM
Such a pretty poem!
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Date: 12/22/2016 11:41:00 PM
Congrats!!! Jo...a beautiful verse my friend...god bless & Merry Christmas...Happy Holidays...^WW^
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Date: 12/22/2016 10:49:00 PM
Wow, Jo. Your muse took quite a turn for this poem. Very fascinating! Congrats!
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Date: 12/20/2016 9:36:00 AM
This is sweet. Have a merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/17/2016 2:31:00 PM
- Never stop dreaming, Jo - A lovely poem - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/16/2016 9:34:00 PM
this is super super cute, Jo . LOVE it.
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Date: 12/16/2016 10:41:00 AM
This was fun and enchanting Jo and the perfect expression of how a child sees things. I loved this.
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Date: 12/16/2016 10:20:00 AM
Hi Jo, This is a fantasy that many can relate too. Good rhymes and imagery as well. The last two lines sums of this write very well. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A Big seven :-) Alexis
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