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My Family

Five long decade past Two unique souls become one Create nine off springs Differ in nature Attain success though deprive Unjust ridicule Loving father rest Siblings help one another Eldest do his part Mother love persists Take good care of her children Struggle is normal Teaching to be still Poverty cant halt fulfillment Happiness goes through Everyone has choice Take and finish course at once Make each dream come true Love and light in us Sharing them all to mankind Noble task to do.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/19/2016 10:20:00 AM
Reads like a very strong family bond and a loving mother..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 5/19/2016 11:27:00 AM
Welcome Sarah!
Date: 5/1/2016 8:12:00 PM
your family sounds marvelous, Marvin. Soupmail for you
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 5/19/2016 11:27:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 4/30/2016 1:43:00 AM
very uplifting, marvin... hope all is fine with the family in iloilo... huggs
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 4/30/2016 5:24:00 AM
Great Nette! Ready your entry with this theme. I will sponsor a senryu contest on "My Family" today....

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