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My eyes

 my eyes are so dark
 and the sun in my sky dead
 So my soul is blind
 but tomorrow a morn star
 shall take a way the night

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  1. Date: 2/25/2011 6:09:00 PM
    Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Constance, Honesty

  1. Date: 2/25/2011 9:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Honesty, in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 4:53:00 PM
    this is so very beautiful. congrats on your win. BG

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 7:01:00 AM
    Congrats HONESTY my friend on your great big win in the Japanese contest luv.. a super cool write.. enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 2/24/2011 12:45:00 AM
    soulful write, honesty.. CONGRATS to you :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 9:45:00 PM
    wow, I am glad you won so that I was able to know you had this poem here. Congratulations. I really like this!

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 9:07:00 PM
    Many congrats Honesty on clinching big win in Debbie's contest. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 1:22:00 PM
    I could really see this being a lovers reply of grief and hope for tomorow. Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 10:46:00 AM
    Honesty, congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest with this raw, well-written tanka!~Chris

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 10:33:00 AM
    Emotional write here,Honesty.Congrats on your big win!---kashinath

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 9:51:00 AM
    Hi there my friend thanks for the entry, I could see how a lover could reply this to a haiku..showing that they are longing and missing the other and waiting to see them again...please join the 5 lines no space please/ no indent..title ---my eyes are so dark..Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/11/2010 12:39:00 AM
    A heartfelt poem, Honesty:) Hugs, Emilia

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 4:15:00 PM
    a very deep emotional piece with well chosen words,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 12:58:00 PM
    Is experimenting a bad thing ?did you like it was it funny.comment? This one I like,because it it explains a rather dead comment. But according to you there is hope. Sometime moving outside of the box stirs the soul.

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 5:44:00 AM
    very optimistic powerful write,honesty.i enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 10:22:00 AM
    Good imagery in this one :) and THANK you for checking my work out!

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 9:47:00 AM
    Nice write with fine images, Honesty

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 9:36:00 AM
    Truly well written, leaving the reader thinking and also with hope. That's excellent! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comment on my latest. Caroline.

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 9:02:00 AM
    They say dawn always follows the darkest nights, Honesty. You have great vision -- no blindness in your sweet soul. A beautiful tanka! Love, Carolyn