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My Eternal You

In this bright array of light I see myself shy, I allow my fears to fright, still In the dark sky. From my agony of silence I tried to hide what’s beneath, surrounding myself with a fence, I gasp to catch my breath. You are the stellar breeze, I felt this so fast, you’ve taken me with ease, I dazzle at this that it may last. I’m hopping that you’d stay true for I’ve waited so long, I’ll never be blue, I know that we belong.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/12/2009 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:18:00 PM
Joseph, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 3/30/2009 5:21:00 PM
first round survivor ka babe!!!!
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Date: 3/30/2009 5:20:00 PM
babe congratz! you made it through the first eliminations! congratz be!!!! love you!
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Date: 3/29/2009 12:56:00 PM
Wonderful writing here, Joseph but I'm wondering in the last stanza if you are jumping up and down (hopping) or wishing (hoping) that she stays true? Interesting either way ... smile ... Congratulations on your writing being a feature this week at the Soup!!
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Date: 3/27/2009 11:36:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week with this passionate write. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/27/2009 11:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, GB Always Tyesha
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Date: 3/27/2009 2:57:00 AM
great and glorious is thy pen Joseph!. this piece is awesome; PASIONATE RYHMING...keep writing and congrats on a well deserved feature... Adeleke
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Date: 3/27/2009 2:55:00 AM
great and glorious is thy pen Joseph!. this piece is awesome; PASIONATE RYHMING...keep writing and congrats on a well deserved feature... Adeleke
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations Joseph on your poem "My Eternal You" being featured thiss week. Vince
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2009 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/23/2009 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/18/2008 1:54:00 AM
those words are lies... none of them are... you're a BIG FAT LIAR!!!!
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Date: 12/4/2008 11:01:00 PM
is that for me?
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