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My Dimension

My problem.
I see minds rather than faces.
I see souls rather than races.
I see futures before starts.
I see darkness in hearts.
I see ones second intentions
I see the sadness unmentioned.
I see tears as impossible.
I see love as a struggle.

My Solution.
I take a chance for once.
I just ask her to lunch.
I forget about futures.
I don’t think from the start.
I just speak from the heart.
Like I do in this poem.
Take love as it goes.
Wherever I roam.

My Problem.
I am who I am.

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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:16:00 PM
    Derek , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 8:23:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 6:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Derek I think we all have a problem I am who I am lol xx

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:10:00 PM
    Derek, a wonderful winning poem~ PD

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 3:39:00 PM
    Great confessions with a wonderful solution- don't hold back- live a little! Congrats on your second place win in my contest :)