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My Desire

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My Desire

From that fateful
first day we crossed

 I have dreamed of
us sharing numerous

Fantasized how we
would entwine our

As we danced to
passion's drums...
no studies.

Books and lessons we
have abandoned, 

Our love all that
matters, though

Our families blood
feud precludes our
love flowering,

The ground stained
forever from

Forbidden though it
may be, it grows

Stronger with each
bloody sunset.. so

Come.. my love my
desire..let's take

For our child's
future we must
escape our plight.

Love...not hate we
must to our child

For to us God has
gifted his wondrous
work of art.


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  1. Date: 9/17/2013 5:04:00 AM
    nice poem but if you want your work read don't post 10 or more poems a day or people won't read you. 3 is acceptable I know when new that the urge to write is overwhelming you show promise keep writing just spread them out a little more Shadow x smiles