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My Day

I've waited for my day But I'm afraid it's not coming With my life I think I'll pay Because its not working the happy tune im humming But hopefully there is one One who will not let me be done Done with my life Someone who will make me put down the knife A knife that I've held for so long A person that is close to me Someone who won't let me begone And someone who won't let me be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/10/2012 1:10:00 PM
I'll make you put down the knife....CAUSE IT MY KNIFE AND I WANT IT BACK!!! :P
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Date: 8/31/2012 8:42:00 AM
Simply written, but it describes how you feel decently well.
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Date: 8/28/2012 3:58:00 AM
everyday is so wonderful,,,especially if we are waiting for something /someone special :)) nice write thanks for sharing this ...wish you all the best Damon:) SK
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