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Hey you, get off of my cloud don’t make me ask you again. I suggest you back away there is nothing here for you. This is my sanctuary, the one place I feel wanted. It’s my chance for happiness and you cannot intervene. When an angel spun this cloud she sealed our love with a kiss. And I won’t let you steal it no matter how hard you try. Don't taint my piece of heaven with your devilish presence. Get the heck off of my cloud, there is only room for me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/18/2015 11:37:00 PM
Emile, Congratulations on your cloud win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/19/2015 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Linda, as always I appreciate your friendly visits. Emile.
Date: 6/18/2015 3:11:00 PM
I really like the picture..Very descriptive accompaniment in poetic form..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/18/2015 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your friendly words. Emile.
Date: 6/17/2015 8:49:00 AM
Ha ha ha ha haaaaa. Great pic, fabulous poem. Goes straight to the point and doesn't sway. Well done.
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Date: 6/17/2015 8:58:00 AM
Thanks Scott, I appreciate your friendly words. Emile.
Date: 6/16/2015 9:27:00 PM
OUCH, that hurt. LOL... You are so good.... Oh my, where have all the clouds gone? Love this, Emile, Congratulations on a poem well done. Thank you for entering my CLOUD contest. Luv SKAT
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Date: 6/17/2015 8:58:00 AM
Thanks so much SKAT, as always I appreciate your friendly words of support. Emile.
Date: 6/14/2015 12:55:00 PM
- One "angry" poem, Emile :)) - Well done - Good luck in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/14/2015 2:02:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your encouraging support. Emile.

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