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My Child Within

My child within lives alone, struggling daily with life taking emotional journeys destination unknown. Eyes that don't look too long the need to search no longer exists. This moment, this instance is all that matters. My child within me whispers ask questions, truths, seeking belief... I cannot answer... when I don't know. Why do these things happen? I want to be happy I don't want to be scared I want a bit of hope I'm tired of feeling sad. My child inside me seeks words of comfort. Reassurance isn't a gift offered when all around violence prevails. I tell my child, it'll be over soon, I suggest they dream travel, don't let the pain get in the way. Remember our feelings are ours their voice only heard by me I'll keep them safe even when fear knocks my door My child within cries softly No tears fall, No noises heard but I feel the pain outwardly I must be strong I cannot show I'm weak My dignity already taken there's nothing left to give soon we'll be alone again we'll comfort each other me and my child within

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/9/2016 11:45:00 PM
Hi Paul ... this is a great first post here! I'd like to invite you to join in my contest... no prizes - just for fun and hopefully inspiring. Find the blog section and my contest is Make Me Feel It ... http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/make_me_feel_it__8072 Welcome to poetry soup!
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Date: 7/4/2016 11:07:00 PM
Paul,:), Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Date: 7/4/2016 9:23:00 PM
Paul, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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