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I fell in love with you before you were born. You've gifted me challenged me frustrated me challenged me delighted me challenged me snuggled me... oh and have I mentioned challenged me? When you were born I believed children could chase butterflies and climb trees and play spin-the-bottle and sometimes even be hateful to one-another. The worst thing that could happen in that fantasy world is a parent would step in and demand attention and discipline and changes in youthful behavior. The worst thing in other words was that our parents would call us out. I did not grow up in a world where people could end up legally dead for going to the 7-11 to buy candy and soda. It floors me that you have to grow up in that kind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/7/2012 11:26:00 AM
great poetry... my heart feels heavy after reading this
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Date: 3/24/2012 4:08:00 PM
Sad indictment of the current way of life Nancy, a tragic story; many thoughts on this and how to act against it ..) Also many realizations of historical deeds of horror..! and the diverse positions of people that did similar awfull things i wish you well..Joe..
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Date: 3/24/2012 7:28:00 AM
a powerful poem about a story that is very frustrating to read about. i liked obama's comments about it.
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Date: 3/23/2012 7:12:00 PM
Ah, you have no idea how close to home this is for me. Locally, something so horrible happened . Tori Stafford was an 8 year old girl who was kidnapped and killed. The trial has begun, and the truth of the crime have finally been revealed. A young woman kidnapped the child, gave Tori to her boyfriend and walked away, listening as the child screamed while she was molested. Then the woman killed her with a hammer. It was tori's first walk home from school alone. I am terrified. Hugs, honey! Cyndi
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Nancy Jones
Date: 3/23/2012 7:59:00 PM
I'm more and more coming to the belief that the "human" species is actually two species... I call them people and zombies and I guaranfuckintee ya that skin color, religion, sexual orientation and all of the other crap we've been trained to dictate our discretion into has no relevance in determining which is which. The relevance is in the light.
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Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 3/23/2012 7:41:00 PM
Yes, white. It is all so awful. Her mother was a drug addict. The animal who took her was a drug dealer. I have heard of the case you are talking about. A clear case of racial hate and injustice. Sicko world. In Nova Scotia a biracial couple had a cross burned on their lawn two years ago. Animals all around.
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Nancy Jones
Date: 3/23/2012 7:31:00 PM
Tragic, but at least there's a trial. The guy who killed Trayvon has not been arrested yet and Monday will be a month. Was the girl you're talking about a white girl?
Date: 3/23/2012 6:55:00 PM
What happened??? have not heard the whole story??
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Nancy Jones
Date: 3/23/2012 7:05:00 PM
Much has happened since this post, but this is the crux, imo http://www.change.org/petitions/prosecute-the-killer-of-our-son-17-year-old-trayvon-martin

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