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My Celestial Life

My life goes on and on without any breaks nor rest it’s like an icicle that melts but never goes away. My life is as perfect as it could be like a rose to be seen A garden of such beauty from the fence to the house My house is warm as a fire burning in a forest Music as Grace to the winds in a meadow my room is messy as a tornado to a house. The color of Red rose to blood Color of the Night Sky to Black Sheets those are the colors to life Everyone else is happy with life while I’m looking at stars in the night Searching for a friend’s light which are Galaxies away Once I find her She brings me happiness and joy from her heart that chines at night My life is as perfect as it could be As we soar though the Nightless Skies of Day and Night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/27/2014 9:27:00 AM
wow! that was awesome, annebelle! That is the one that you showed me. I loved all of the Rose references too. Great job!
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Date: 10/26/2014 5:13:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Annebelle - I choose your first very well written poem - I like it a lot!! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/25/2014 12:13:00 AM
Beautiful piece filled with awesome imagery! Well done! Welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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