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My Birthday Treat

Tonight is my birthday and I'm in for a surprise
My darling desires to thrill my eyes
The living room is set and the lights are turned low
Scented candles are lit as I await what she shows

Soft ballads play from rock bands we adore
To my left she enters such beauty amour
In sexy black lace with traces of deep red
Her curvaceous shapes play with my head

Teasing and taunting in her gypsy style dance
Erotic she is, my eyes captured in trance
Pouting she writhes alluring my clutch
Staying out of reach, denying me of touch

Scintillating movements as she edges real close
Her perfume entices my desire to pursue
My hearts now pumping in manly crave
As I catch her kisses in loving threw

Closer she dances as she takes my hand
As I arise and join her as we take to the floor
Embraced we are on this special night
Passion awaits with my girl I adore

Touchingly we kiss as our hands declare
Revealing to each other our bodily joys
Blissful caressing declares our time
Our bodies unite in loving employ

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  1. Date: 11/8/2014 9:14:00 PM
    such a sultry temptuous treat you have . :D

    Fraser Avatar James Fraser
    Date: 11/9/2014 3:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I certainly have in writing, real life, nope, but hey ho! that's the way it goes. But fun writing all the same, and it adds to the range that I've written........Cheery, James........
  1. Date: 10/18/2010 8:51:00 AM
    Pardon me while I wipe the sweat from my brow. Very passionate, James, but you should have told us it was your birthday!!! Now I have to send belated birthday greetings. I hope you had the kind of evening you are describing in this ultra-sensual poem!! Happy Birthday, my Highland Friend! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 8:10:00 PM
    very sensual indeed ! what a birthday treat! take care~Deb

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 4:02:00 PM
    I LOVE THIS ...such a write that everywoman feels sges the girl in your treat x sarah

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 1:13:00 PM
    Happy Birthday..Sara

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 11:23:00 AM
    Very well written.....

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 9:35:00 AM
    Many thank you's for your lovely comments. My birthday is on Jan 4th. But I just so adore telling stories as such in my poetry. I have an overactive mind. Have a lovely Sunday all >> James

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 9:09:00 AM
    Happy Birthday..sounds like you dont need any more lovely James. BG

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 9:09:00 AM
    .....sigh....., oh yea , back to the comment, another fantastic write James, and Happy Birthday

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 9:03:00 AM
    James you do this form so well. I still giggle at my effort the last time. Yummy birthday treat you got hey. Giving the ladies ideas with this one ;) Wilma

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 8:52:00 AM
    Happy birthday and many returns of the day, James. I enjoyed last quatrain the most