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Your birthday is indeed a great time of gaiety, It calls for a celebration, a Grand Poetic Party But, what I have just said is only a secondary Most importantly, your life is great and healthy. I am writing this poem first and foremost, To send my love and best wishes to the most For all the dreams of yours, let’s make a toast May they all be fulfilled without any cost. Since, I don’t have here your complete address, I cannot send you chocolates, cakes or roses So, I’ll just send my fervent prayer for success To God, He may protect you, guide you and bless. I will also enclose in these lines of my poem, My songs of bliss for you and your family at home, May you be free from all worries and gloom Age added but, you’re a gal who incessantly bloom. Our dear Debbie Guzzi , have a very happy birthday, If you are only here, I’ll dance with you today, Like a lady on her debut on the 18th Natal Day You’re our Grand Celebrity in ‘tis Land of Poetry. Belated Happy, Happy Birthday!!!!!! Written: Sept. 25,2012 First Place Contest: It's My Birthday Contest Judged: 9/30/2012 Poet Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi (the b-day celebrant)

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Date: 10/3/2012 1:09:00 AM
Thank you so much for your warm congratulatory comments! More power and blessings to all of your!! love/hugs:) LG
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Date: 10/2/2012 8:45:00 PM
a lovely tribute to Debbie for her birthday. Well done. Lee
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Date: 10/2/2012 2:08:00 PM
HI LEONORA, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD
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Date: 10/1/2012 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Leonora. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2012 2:25:00 AM
Big Congratulations Leonora xx
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:17:00 PM
BIG CONGRATULATIONS MY DEAR FRIEND NORE FOR WINNING 1ST PLACE ON DEBBIE’S CONTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALWAYS!! (^_^) MWUAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 9/30/2012 12:50:00 PM
Talented writer wonderful work! Thank you from the bottom of me heart. Light & Love
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Date: 9/28/2012 8:29:00 PM
Nice tribute to a terrific lady.
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Date: 9/26/2012 9:39:00 PM
Leonora, a sweet one here for the Lady of poetry...very nice indeed. Thanks for visits and comments. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/26/2012 5:03:00 PM
oh! You are so sweet Leonora,,,, did i ruin my own surprise... My heart knows you are a blessing, and sweet in thoughts.. I'm looking forward to your B-day as well...i already have a special blog for you.. xox~pd
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Date: 9/26/2012 11:12:00 AM
NICE WRITE MATE AND TRIBUTE YOUR POEM SPEACKS FOR ITS SELF XX DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 9/26/2012 9:57:00 AM
Leonora this is beautiful, a classical poem, which the Queen of poetry will love i'm sure...
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Date: 9/26/2012 6:54:00 AM
Leonora; this very beautiful, I am sure that Debbie will enjoy it. She is one great lady. Thanks for reading ( The moon Cried )Many blessings. Lucilla
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Date: 9/25/2012 9:21:00 PM
beautiful poem my dear..I'm sure she will love this... have a nice day!!
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Date: 9/25/2012 9:08:00 PM
this is an awesome birthday message that you gave her. One of the best in the contest I've seen! And gosh, do you even know her very well. I'm impressed.
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Date: 9/25/2012 8:24:00 PM
Leonora, wow...what an exciting way to express a Birthday, for Debbie,,, he he he..sounds like something I would do,,, to entertain my self. I love this land of poetry, and how we can celebrate here with our friends... wishing you the best in this fun contest... love ~ :-) pd
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Date: 9/25/2012 6:41:00 PM
Beautiful birthday card for Debbie here Leonora!Enjoyed the read.Best wishes to you.
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