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My Better Half

The spirit of the woman I love has changed me, this I do know The sheer force of her femininity has made me a better man, absolutely so She engages me with godly dialog, it helps elevate my consciousness She's the woman I've always desired, who truly makes me feel blessed She's my better half Lord knows, she is the best She completes my identity, I love her unconditionally, I confess The spirit of the man I love is so amazing, this I do feel He loved me in spite of my brokenness God has blessed me from above, with this man's love I'm now healed He caresses my heart like a dove's sigh, with such gentle tenderness He's my better half God knit our hearts together He completes me so in every way, I'm his soul mate and lover forever This was written in collaboration with Alexis Y. Her poetic voice helped inspire this work of art

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Patrice Trice Jackson

Date: 11/8/2016 10:09:00 AM

I love this poem...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2016 3:35:00 PM

this is really nice what you did with Alexis. You are both so talented and complement each other completely!

Janis Thompson

Date: 11/1/2016 2:23:00 AM

It resembles the lyrics to a song. It would make a beautiful song. Well written collaboration.

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/1/2016 6:43:00 AM

Ty, Janis. I really do appreciate the loving words you gave us. Much love to you and yours. RW

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 10/31/2016 8:48:00 PM

Very nice collab poem you guys! P & L~Che

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/31/2016 10:29:00 PM

Ty, Cheryl. I had such a good time working w/Alexis. I loved every minute of it. Appreciate the nice comment. Love always to you, dear. RW

White Wolf

Date: 10/31/2016 8:22:00 PM

This is an awesome collaboration RW. Keep up the good work my friend.

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/31/2016 10:28:00 PM

Ty, Rick. It was a thoroughly enjoyable venture. She is awesome to work with. Love you, bruh.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/31/2016 7:24:00 PM

Ty, Alexis for the time and effort given to make this poem the romantic gem I believe it is. You are an exceptionally talented poetess. I am honored to have been able to work w/you on this lovely poem. Many blessings to you. More love always. RW

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/31/2016 7:40:00 PM

Hi Freddie, It was my pleasure to write such a beautiful and romantic piece with you. You are a remarkable poet .I am honored to have collaborated with you as well.I loved the end result. :-)Alexis