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My Beloved

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My Beloved

When I saw the beauty of my beloved;
I fell on my knees, worshiping!
Is there anything more divine than my beloved's charm?
When sun shines, it gives birth to Life, 
and when my beloved smiles, LOVE is born.

(Please leave a comment on how to improve my writing skills. I am open for criticism.)

- Harj

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  1. Date: 6/22/2014 9:25:00 AM
    Hi Harj, Your poem is rather short but it seems you have the right technique to create good poetry, my tip for you is to browse through some of the poetry you see on Poetry Soup by practising their style you poems will improve.all the best