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My Beloved

Inside such dreams of never lasting days We traversed such wanting thoughts in emotional astray On that December night, to our cottage on the hill Where on many a moonlit walk, we allowed our thoughts to spill Our footprints of life we took in threaded tread we walked When one was about to talk, in confusion abound, we baulked Snowflakes we often talked about, turned to emotional rain Drowning your wisps of auburn, natures moistness becomes our drain Such memories of our past, where the rains graced your clover And I your beloved, once graced your body over No longer shall I sense your breath so warm against my chest As you delightfully grace my lobes, my internal heart now stressed Your kisses I still feel, their once touch of tender brush Like tumble-weed they now drift, my lips in different crush On warm white sheets we used to lay, we called them our clouds of heaven No longer shall crease, not one day out of seven No longer shall our fingers dance over undulations of we Or will our torso's mingle, like the ivy graces the tree The losing of you is massive, our peripheral declares it a shame Beloved to each other we're not, it's life, no ones to blame..... < Inspired by 'Charmaine Chircop's “Pasionata” > <*>

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/28/2014 7:27:00 PM
A beautiful and poignant read James. I could feel your emotions as I read this. Melancholy and heartfelt. A very moving poem! Excellent my friend!
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James Fraser
Date: 10/30/2014 5:11:00 PM
Thank you Suzanne, it's much appreciated reading my poetry, James :)
Date: 9/29/2014 8:37:00 AM
Just found this jewel my friend. Definitely a 7 rating and a pleasure to have read this fine morn..
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Date: 9/30/2014 5:42:00 PM
Written whilst reading a few words by Charmaine, then Boom, written soon. Thanks kindly for the visit Robert, James :)
Date: 8/14/2014 9:30:00 AM
Awww... emotional. Snifff... Very powerful! Bravo! LoveLots, Ara
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Date: 8/14/2014 3:17:00 PM
Many thanks Arabelle for gracing my humble poems, very much appreciated, James :)
Date: 7/13/2013 11:29:00 PM
such a wonderful poem.I just love it.keep goin James
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Date: 4/9/2013 6:55:00 AM
You have skills my friend. I am glad you entered my contest so that I was introduced to your work.
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Date: 4/8/2013 3:22:00 PM
such a melancholy poem but so touching and lovely, James. Nice seeing you here today!
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Date: 3/31/2013 11:36:00 AM
Oh this touches the heart and I feel the emotions in this poem. Happy Easter to you. This poem makes me sad for lost love and all that was. I think it will go into my fav love phyl
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Date: 3/28/2013 7:21:00 PM
you know how to touch hearts greatly.hope all is well.
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Date: 3/27/2013 6:56:00 AM
Hi James First time I am reading your poetry, and this one is beautiful! I love the way you have combined the beauty of nature with the beauty and emotions of love....lovely !
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Date: 3/25/2013 1:20:00 PM
yes.....intense....thanks James!
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Date: 3/17/2013 1:17:00 PM
No picture is needed I enjoyed yr poem verse, pros. Ann WI
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Date: 3/17/2013 11:16:00 AM
So sad, and so beautiful....I feel I have read a classic tragic novel. Wonderful poem, James!
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Date: 3/8/2013 6:14:00 AM
This my dear poet friend, this for true deserves adulation James...(((((claps))))) ! This sir I so enjoyed...though a sad ending, every ride seems to end. Have a wonderful week my friend....much love,james
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Date: 3/2/2013 1:13:00 AM
Wow..Im so overwhelmed..my humble verse inspired such a beauty.I was missing your romantic poetry James.I do miss those good old days when you carolyn nikko raul.james and many talented poets used to.be so.frequent here.Hope you are fine..and this gem.goes tmfvs..Charmaine
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