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Alone or in a group, I can get by, and also I have friends of whom I’m fond. It’s even possible that I would die for one with whom I shared a special bond. I’m speaking as a dolphin. Could you guess? Of all God’s animals, that is the one that shares its traits with me, for I possess intelligence, and also I am fun! One skill of mine that I appreciate is shared by dolphins. Though my sounds aren’t “clicks,” I have the talent to communicate, and like the dolphin, I can learn good tricks! How fun to jump the waves like dolphins do! Inside warm currents I would swim and play. Beneath the deep blue ocean, I could view its beauties, roaming freely every day. Some dolphins have saved humans from a chase by sharks! The kindest creatures of the sea are those that have a smile fixed on their face! As sweet as they, a dolphin I would be.
By Andrea Dietrich for Kristen Bruni's Contest: "If I was Animal What Would I Be"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/23/2011 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2011 12:13:00 PM
Love this one - many congrats on your win, Andrea : )
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Date: 5/20/2011 8:46:00 PM
I can so see you hun as a dolphin. You are so talented with this one.
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Date: 5/20/2011 6:36:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your win.This one is worthy of higher placement..:)
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Date: 5/20/2011 3:25:00 PM
love this one andie... best congrats for the stunning win! :) huggs
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Date: 5/20/2011 2:22:00 PM
I knew this would be a winner, Andrea. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/20/2011 2:18:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your great win in the animal contest with this awesome entry my friend.. super write.. enjoy your win with luv..
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Date: 5/20/2011 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of kristen, Andrea
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Date: 5/8/2011 5:09:00 AM
Great mammal you have chosen for the contest theme Andrea, i would like to see this as a winner!
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Date: 5/7/2011 11:50:00 AM
Ooo I do hope this leaps out of the water to the podium. I so love Dolphins. I stay about 3 miles from a Pod of them in the Moray Firth. Good luck with this lovely poetry....:)
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Date: 5/6/2011 8:08:00 PM
A wonderful write, Andrea! I find them to be a supreme creature of the sea, and I have no doubt that you share their amazing characteristics. Totally enjoyed this piece...feels like a winner to me! Best wishes...Mikki
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Date: 5/6/2011 4:40:00 PM
Wonderful, Andrea! Studies have shown that dolphins are actually attracted to people who smile. A group of them saved my Aunt Eva from sharks and little Elian Gonzalez who was stranded at sea while trying to migrate from Cuba to America was also saved by them. Love your poem. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 5/6/2011 4:59:00 AM
Oh, I forgot to wish you Good luck in the contest...so All the best Andrea with this entry on amazingly intelligent and pretty- dolphins ...gautami
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Date: 5/6/2011 4:56:00 AM
In this I could easily picture you with the dolphins in the sea. I love horses most and qualities match :) so I wrote on them, but my next was dolphin , being a water animal myself. They are darlings, and you too are.and about Iowa dear, my younger sis lived there some yrs back before shifting to Minn.rochester. I'll ask her about that food joint, they're sure to have snacked there..if not they would love to if they visit there. huggs, gautami..
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Date: 5/5/2011 9:07:00 PM
I can see you jumping in the water and chatting with these wonderful creatures. Cute picture you have penned here. love phyl
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Date: 5/5/2011 6:12:00 AM
Hey there Andrea, I could actually picture you swimming with dolphins and enjoying every minute thereof, with a smile on your face.. enjoyed this write this afternoon.. btw that write of mine was pure fiction :) glad you enjoyed it, love Wilma
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Date: 5/4/2011 7:33:00 PM
Hey, why is Daver down here asking me if my animal is a lab? hahahaha.
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Date: 5/4/2011 6:47:00 PM
good luck in the contest.. thanks,..p.d.
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Date: 5/4/2011 6:41:00 PM
Hey Andrea, Insanity aside, one of my wishes before I die is swim with dolphins. yep that's on me bucket list. And you make a good dolphin too. I mean that as a complement. Really.
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Date: 5/4/2011 6:08:00 PM
Wonderful poem bringing the attributes of the Dolphins with self realization, Andrea
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Date: 5/4/2011 4:17:00 PM
okay, bull's eye! i now baptize you andolphina, lol... such a seamless write, heartie! forget the deer, elephant, etc.. you're a dophin at heart... lovel write with greeat winning pints! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/4/2011 3:16:00 PM
Whatcha got, a Lab? My Son, Art, had a Lab named Aura that was a real lover. Whatever. Your animal must get his/her sweetness from you. Love, Dave
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:50:00 PM
Yes, you'd make a good dolphin, Andrea : )
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:43:00 PM
ok reading now-- replying (sorry slowpoke me ^_^)
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:34:00 PM
click, click, click, click!! heehee I actually need a translator now O_o 00 I can only thinking of my mouse clicking, heehee ;) but seriously I think I just said, yup-- let's head on over to Great Salt Lake-- and thanks for dropping by my poem sweetie-- yup I am thanking those ants for that poem, haha it really made me write on paper (they weren't fire ants though, thank goodness!) --hugs to you :)
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