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My Angel Renee

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My Angel Renee

Each night when I go to bed
I think of all the words I've said
And ponder on the things I've  done
How your love I had once won

Many tears I've made you shed
Too many sleepless nights in your bed
When all along I owned the key
To keep your love for only me

Now its me that sheds the tears
My life now full of empty fears
You say uncertainty prevailing
Caught up in all my mistakes and failings

My love for you has never faded
Lack of commitment, your feelings jaded
Baby steps, I moved too slow
I did that because I love you so

I wanted for us the best of life,
Messy details, cleaned before you became my wife
Now lost you are, trying to find you way
My mind consumed, what to do, what to say

Now is the time to use our voice
Together or separated,  its your choice
I am beside you, can you see
You are the only one for me

The love we shared, captured all my desires
Burned hotter than the devils fires
So my Angel we both must try
To grow our love, not let it die.

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  1. Date: 4/14/2013 11:08:00 PM
    Really good poem. I feel for you Brother, and I hope this lady gives you the chance you deserve!

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 11:14:00 AM
    welcome to poetry soup nice poem hope to read more.

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 8:51:00 AM
    Richard, if this is the present, then I hope things work out for you and the one you love. If this is the past and did not last I am horrible sorry. I once walked the path you are on...I wish you a rainbow with all my heart because the sunlight comes after the rain. Just Ed

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 5:18:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Richard. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 4:41:00 PM
    Beautiful! May your great love be seen for the great love it is. No woman can turn away from the poet! Richard welcome to Poetry Soup I was looking for a friend, I thought maybe they had joined. His name was not there but your name and the Aussie flag was so from one Aussie to another welcome Richard ! Lizzie Treetop