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My Age and I

1. Age my loving friend, From the instant, I was born at that specific time You and I inseparable remained Holding hands as years have been passing slowly one After the other 2. Never separated we were Although when young, eager was I to hurry forward And when older I grew, yearned to linger a little bit Behind But you, My wise counselor ceaselessly were unyielding Advising me by your side to stay always For only in that way, you told me, would I happy be, When in harmony I followed your pace In that way, you said, I could see and learn and understand Everything, as it should be and at its proper time 3. Together through an impressive string of Stunning transformations we went, We were young and fresh, daring, provoking Inquisitive and challenging, energetic and resourceful So The pick of our vigor we soon reached And glorified life 4. The years though started passing fast before Our own eyes The mood changed eventually and cautious became, Less daring, less challenging Less energetic and less eager But Always interested we were to see what to us Was coming 5. One day gray hair appeared that soon turned Into white And shortly after wrinkles started to be apparent But you and I, my friend, clinched we were to One-another Never let each other’s hand For All these years I have learned to trust you, your Wisdom and judgment Cause You never stopped amassing me Never ceased teaching me a lesson In that way, I grew up and fell in love With all, I was doing 6. Till my last moment, I know very well That you will never let me down For your faces are innumerable, your lessons are Unending The rewards you have offered me so far and Those to me you still intend to offer, No matter how old I come to be, All of them are precious, all blessed and All divine 7. Now that life’s road I see is coming to a Conclusion I would like, from the bottom of my heart, to Thank you without fail For holding my hand that long a dear time Cause I know too many of my friends that such a chance was Never to them presented 8. For all these reasons, Age my adoring friend, from me You will never hear complaints Because I have come to know so well That As long as I keep getting old, able I would be, alive To remain! 9. How could I not be happy with you, my generous Loving Age? © Demetrios Trifiatis 26 AUGUST 2014

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Date: 2/9/2015 4:15:00 PM
Wisdom in your words, Demetrios, and a wonderful wife to stand by you. I wish I had the energy I use to have when I was younger. There is not enough time in the day to do everything I want. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/9/2015 5:30:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. happy you liked it!
Date: 11/9/2014 9:05:00 AM
Resourceful! I thought age was dramatic and could stand as moment of of lost and and regrets.Wrong, for the present poem teaches new ways to comprehend (old) age, get rid of complaints. I like very much!
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Date: 9/5/2014 3:21:00 AM
A very beautiful write Demetrios. You and your knowledge to age is priceless. I have enjoyed reading this piece. Well done Demetrios... Verlena
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/22/2014 8:19:00 AM
Thank you my friend, Verlena, for your gracious comment and visit!
Date: 8/26/2014 8:27:00 PM
You and I are cut from the same cloth my dear Demetrios! Separated by oceans but very close in spirit! It was so so great hearing from you my Ex-Montrealer! I wish you much happiness in you "golden" years! Let's not be such strangers! Cheers my friend!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/27/2014 1:28:00 AM
If wisdom comes with age, we have no excuse not to use it constructively to bridge the oceans that separate us dear friend! I, for one, always wished that! Thank you for your wishes for my golden years. Let us hope they will be apart from "Golden" healthy as well! Thank you for your precious visit!
Date: 8/26/2014 12:38:00 PM
you glow with age.. so poignantly done, D.. one for the books!.. huggs
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/27/2014 1:22:00 AM
Dear nette, if no age, no glow! Thank you very much for your kind visit and gracious comment!
Date: 8/26/2014 4:49:00 AM
- A journey in "time" ... as the years go on ..... - we learn and get experience .... we are wiser and getting wrinkles and gray hair .... but, we can not do so much over the years that have passed in our life, but we can do a lot of the breadth and depth - A clever poems about life, Demetrios ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/26/2014 5:16:00 AM
thank you for your visit and comment my dear friend, Anne-Lise.
Date: 8/25/2014 8:36:00 PM
a very creative and beautifully crafted poem, demetrios! i love the way you've divided it, too...
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/26/2014 5:19:00 AM
Ilene, it is so wonderful to see you again! Thank you so much for your comment!
Date: 8/25/2014 6:14:00 PM
this is very beauty and profound tribute of a man happy in himself and with life Demetrios great pen hugs
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/26/2014 5:21:00 AM
I deeply appreciate your visit and comment my, dear Shadow! Thank you for your cordial comment!
Date: 8/25/2014 5:39:00 PM
what wisdom in this one. Very good read, and I love that sentiment of 8. As long as I keep getting old, able I would be, alive to remain!!!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/26/2014 5:24:00 AM
Yes, Andrea, people would be happier if they realize that the only way to stay alive is to get older! Complaining that we get older is like wishing we die! Thank you so much for your precious comment!
Date: 8/25/2014 12:52:00 PM
This is so beautiful and so wisely written. I never had a problem with my age and never lied about it. The Avatar that you see of me is my last picture when I came out of the hospital in late may. I am 71 years old and I look pretty sick, but that's life. Have a blessed day.... Lucy
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/26/2014 5:30:00 AM
Dear Lucy, thank you for taking the time to write such a superb comment! Hope you overcome all health problems and stay with us for many, many years to come! God bless you!
Date: 8/25/2014 1:14:00 AM
Demetri....I wish you long life, my dear. I traveled through this journey with you and in my mind's eye I pictured you at these different stages and now at the glorious state that you are in! :) Beautiful throughout. I'm proud to know someone of your caliber of character and wisdom. :) H mykrouli!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/25/2014 1:22:00 AM
Etela sou minimah...thiavaze to! :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/25/2014 1:20:00 AM
You are so kind, loving and generous as life itself! Having friends with a kind heart like yours and a brilliant mind is a reward for me! Thank you mikroula mou! One of the secrets of a happy life is to accept our age at every single moment and try to learn the lessons life is willing to teach us! God bless you!

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