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My 1st Bike

The best damn bike - I’d ever seen Metallic paint - British Racing Green Retro Styled – built for fun, not speed A fine design – very fine indeed Out for a spin - to the shops and back In a short time - I’d got the knack Down the hill – wasn’t even trying But man alive – I was really flying What’s that – a bloody cat! Waved my arms – shouted "SCAT!" The dumb thing froze – like a dust mop Yanked on the anchors – rapid stop Slammed down hard – on the cross-bar White hot pain – testicular trauma Truth be told – I’m no wimp But to this day – I walk with a limp [Originally published on my blog on world poetry day] http://wp.me/p2mUkP-cc

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Date: 4/27/2013 2:57:00 AM
I love this line "But man alive – I was really flying''very nice realistic piece.I like the wimp...limp contrast. Very beautiful.
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Date: 4/26/2013 10:06:00 AM
lol. I love your phrase "testicular trauma". I sure hope this is a work of fiction, especially the latter part. Nice writing, David. :)
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David Sollis
Date: 4/26/2013 10:32:00 AM
Delysia, I wish it were fiction (the latter part), but it's based on an actual true life experience.

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