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My 18 year old son

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My 18 year old son

N ever a harsh word spoken
I love you mom he says every day
C aring and considerate 
H appy and carefree
O n the ball about his chores
L ooking for food in the cupboard doors
A lways eating me out of house and home
S haring time with mom before he leaves home

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  1. Date: 5/1/2010 6:02:00 PM
    excellent poem. Very fine loving relationship well defined with these simple words in this Acrostic, Michelle.I enjoyed it -Robert

  1. Date: 5/1/2010 5:31:00 PM
    Fine use of alliteration and the feelings for the son