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Mute Man Song

A sad emotive Blue ballad from The broken soul Of a mute man poet His heart pounds a silent beat From deep within As he begins To ballet with his fingers Vocalizing his pain To the world of blind and deaf In the monsoon rain Of his tears As he express His feelings and fear About his future In this cold world Of insentient hearts Being blind, mute or deaf Doesn’t mean dead This is the pain That was easy to swallow But hard to digest So now I suggest To take this fiery feeling Out of my chest Because they alienate us They dig black holes For us to find homes Because all we are to the society We lost souls To those Who got eyes to see And ears to listen We are just disable clowns Because we are half human But to those who got Minds to think And hearts to feel We all human beings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/15/2015 6:26:00 PM
Hi Molantwa, this is such an excellent piece that I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Molantwa Mmele
Date: 12/3/2015 2:54:00 AM
wow I'm so grateful for that, I'm happy you liked it. thanks a lot
Date: 11/10/2015 8:29:00 AM
Molantwa, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Molantwa Mmele
Date: 11/11/2015 1:42:00 AM
thanks a lot for such a warm welcome, and I would like to read more of your poem too Linda
Date: 11/9/2015 8:20:00 AM
Molantwa Mmele,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Molantwa Mmele
Date: 11/11/2015 1:48:00 AM
thanks a lot Skat, much appreciated

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