Mute

Wordless and silent. Verb archer on vacation. Muse out for late lunch.

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Joanna Smith

Date: 2/25/2010 2:19:00 PM

very good write here i enjoyed it. Jo

Date: 2/1/2010 6:47:00 PM

Love this. I can relate to my muse being out to lunch. WHAT A CREATIVE VIEW--one that writers surely will relate to. The second and third lines are just awesome. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment. Keep up the good writing. Karen

John Freeman

Date: 1/31/2010 11:15:00 AM

Smile, this is a very cool one Sue. Charming and witty! Sincerely, love Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2010 4:48:00 PM

hahaha, not really funny for the writer, but the poem itself has a great little humor to it. Great title for it too, the mute muse!! Luv, andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/23/2010 6:06:00 PM

Verb guy on same cruise with mine probably right along with those adverbially adjective nouns. Traitors all at times! Cool Senryu, Sue.- Robert

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 1/22/2010 6:12:00 PM

Sue~Very good one filed with truths for all writer at one time of another! Laura :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2010 4:10:00 PM

Interesting write. I especially like the second line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara